题目内容
【题目】书面表达
76.以“The Hero in My Heart”为题,写一篇不少于80词的短文。
提示:可以谈论一下你心中的英雄是谁(比如亲人、朋友、老师或名人等);他(她)有什么样的事迹或故事;你喜欢他(她)的原因及应该怎样向他(她)学习。
【答案】The Hero in My Heart
Jackie Chan is one of the most famous film stars in China.And he is also a hero in my heart.
He played a role in a film when he was a child.Through his hard work, he has made over 80 films.He is so brave and careful that he always tries his best to make the action perfect.As a Chinese, he promises to make every foreigner know Chinese kung fu culture well.
From Jackie Chan, we can learn a lot, such as the resolution to succeed and the thoughts of helping others.
【解析】
写作思路:本文属于记述人物类作文,题目为我心中的英雄,文章可以分为三个部分:首先开篇点题,指出谁是我心中的英雄; 接下来崇拜他的原因,有哪些值得我崇拜的地方; 最后做一总结。本篇作文首先第一句Jackie Chan is one of the most famous film stars in China. And he is also a hero in my heart.做到开篇点题,提出谁是我心中的英雄。接下来陈述他为什么是我心中的英雄,其中用到though, so….that….等连词,使文章具有连贯性,最后From Jackie Chan, we can learn a lot, such as….总结从他那里我学到了什么。文章思路清晰,层次分明,时态运用正确,也做到了语言的连贯性。