Question

【题目】Writing

94. Write at least 60 words about the topic “I finished a task successfully” （请以‘我成功地完成了一项任务’为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

你再初中四年的学习生活中一定完成过家长，学校和老师布置的一项任务。请你简单描述一次完成任务的经历。

Answer 1

【答案】I finished a task successfully

When I was 10 years old, I managed to buy vegetables by myself. One day, my mom was occupied with work, thus she asked me to buy some vegetables for dinner. Confident and excited, I said yes without hesitation because it would be my first time to shop on my own. Hardly had I arrived the supermarket when I began to regret. So many kinds of vegetables were there that it is difficult for me to choose, tomatoes, potatoes, cabbages or eggplants. Suddenly, It occurred to me that I could call my uncle for help. With the help of him, I finally completed the task. Upon my mom arriving home and seeing the vegetables, she praised me, which made me feel happy and satisfied.

【解析】这是一篇命题作文，在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。本文主要是第一人称，时态为一般过去时。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。