Question

书面表达 。（15分）

假如Tom是你最好的朋友，但是他最近身体不适，原因是他养成了非常不健康的生活习惯，比如：不爱吃蔬菜水果，不爱吃早餐；晚睡晚起；不爱锻炼身体等，请你根据以上内容写一封信为他提出合理的建议。（首尾已给出）

Dear Tom,

I feel sorry that you are sick these days. ________________________________

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Yours sincerely,

Lily

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Dear Tom,

I feel sorry that you are sick these days. Let me tell you something about how to keep healthy. You should eat more vegetables and fruit. And you had better have breakfast every day. You should get up early and go to bed early. It is important for you to exercise every day. You need keep drinking milk, because it is good for your health. I hope this can help you and you will be healthier.

Yours sincerely,

Lily

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，写一封信给汤姆，提出保持健康的合理建议。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，二人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Let me......; You should......; It is important for you ......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头对汤姆生病表示遗憾，接下来给他提出一些关于健康的建议，最后希望汤姆身体更健康。此处用了句型It is important for you to do sth ，短语tell sb about sth, keep healthy ,keep doing,be good for等这些词组也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。