Question

【题目】书面表达

每个人心里都有对未来的憧憬，你的未来将会是什么样子的呢？请根据下面的提示及要求，以“ My future ”为题写一篇英语短文。

提示：1.我想当一名医生，帮助并照顾病人，不论多辛苦，我都不会放弃我的工作；

2.我还希望有一个幸福的家庭，我的工作和家庭会让我感到快乐。

要求：

1.语句通顺连贯，条例清晰，可适当发挥；

2.70词左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

My future

What do I want to do when I'm older ? Someone wants to be a basketball player because they are good at sport. Someone wants to be a writer and to make the writing. Someone wants to be a teacher because they like teaching children. I have a dream in my mind for a long time. The dream is that I want to be a doctor. Now I will help to look after the patients. No matter how hard the work is , I will never give it up .

I also want to have a happy family.I wish my job and my family will make me feel happy.

To achieve my dream, I must work hard now.

【解析】

试题解析：这是一篇提纲作文，主要介绍自己对未来的憧憬。包括两个方面的内容：一是想做一名医生，二是想有一个幸福的家庭。因为介绍的是将来的事情，所以主要用将来时态。

写作亮点：这篇短文语句通顺连贯，条例清晰。并能够适当的进行发挥。短文中运用了大量的复合句，如：Someone wants to be a teacher because they like teaching children.，The dream is that I want to be a doctor.，No matter how hard the work is , I will never give it up等。这使得文章增色不少。