Question

【题目】 书面表达

假设李华是你的同班同学，请根据以下提示及要求，用英语写一篇题为" My Classmate"的短文．

提示：1．他个子高，长相英俊，成绩优秀，擅长运动；

2．他乐于助人（举一个例子）；

3．对他的评价．

要求：1．文中不能出现真实的姓名及校名；2．词数80左右．

My Classmate

__________．

Answer 1

【答案】My Classmate

Li Hua is my classmate and my good friend. He is tall and handsome. His grades are excellent and he always does well in exams. He is also good at sports because he thinks health is very important. He is ready to help others. He often helps me with my English. Last year he helped a ten﹣year﹣old boy who lost his way find his mother. I think Li Hua is a kind person．Everybody in my class likes him very much. I hope we will be good friends forever.

【解析】

这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍你的同班同学。主要从1．他个子高，长相英俊，成绩优秀，擅长运动；2．他乐于助人（举一个例子）；3．对他的评价。这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第三人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

He is also good at sports because he thinks health is very important. 他也擅长运动，因为他认为健康很重要。

句子because he thinks health is very important.是由because引导的原因状语从句。

【高分句型二】

Last year he helped a ten﹣year﹣old boy who lost his way find his mother. 去年，他帮助一个迷路的十岁男孩找到了他的母亲。

句子who lost his way find his mother.是由who引导的定语从句。