Question

20．初中阶段的学习和生活即将结束，你的老师陪伴你度过了三年的校园生活．回顾其中的许多点点滴滴，久久不能忘记．假如你是李磊，请你给你的某一位教师写封信，和他（她）说说感激的心里话．
注意：书写规范；语句连贯；表达准确；80词左右．
提示词：work hard，be strict with，interesting，get along well with，encourage，brave，make much progress，…
Dear my teacher，
Leaving you-lovely junior school life，I have so many words from my heart to say．
                                                                                
Thank you again for what you've done for us!All the best to you!
Yours，
Li Lei．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．因为你的课非常生动有趣，对我们来说学好英语很简单有趣．
句中"because your class is very interesting and lively"为原因状语从句，主句为"it is+形容词+for sb to do sth 对某人来说做某事…"结构．
高分句型二：
When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．当我考试失败的时候，你鼓励我不断努力．
句中"When I failed in an exam"为条件状语从句，主句"you encouraged me to keep trying"中有短语"encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人做某事"、"keep doing sth 一直做某事"．

解答 Dear my teacher，
Leaving you-lovely junior school life，I have so many words from my heart to say．I still remember that you became our English teacher three years ago．You always work hard and treat us well．You are strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly．It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．【高分句型一】
During my school life，we can get along well with each other．When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．【高分句型一】When I had trouble in life，you told me to be brave．（回忆初中生活）
Because of your help，many students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．You have given me so much
Thank you again for what you've done for us!All the best to you!（表示感谢）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Li Lei

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．