Question

【题目】书面表达（满分15分）

假设你是Linda，你们学校志愿者协会招募新成员，打算在假期到本市儿童医院组织志愿者活动。你决定加入他们，去参加这个志愿者活动。请根据以下提示，写一份申请信。

注意：1. 文中必须包括提示中的要点，并作适当补充；

2. 80词左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Dear Chairman,

I’m Linda, a student from Class Five, Grade Eight. I know you need new members for your volunteer group and I want to be one of them.

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Yours,

Linda

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Chairman,

I’m Linda, a student from Class Five, Grade Eight. I know you need new members for your volunteer group and I want to be one of them.

I love kids and I really hope they can feel better with my help. Can I go to Children’s Hospital to be a volunteer during this vacation? I will try my best to help the kids and cheer them up by telling them funny stories. I think volunteering is great. And we should always think about people around us.

I hope I can be a member of your volunteer group. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Linda.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，题目中已经给出了很多信息和要点。在写作时，要注意审题，不要遗漏要点。从题目可知，这篇文章是学校志愿者协会招募新成员，要求写的一封申请信，所以要用第一人称写，可以用一般现在时。在组织语言的时候，要注意表达的准确性。句子要完整，表达要清晰，句子之间要流畅。

写作亮点：这篇文章紧扣材料，内容完整，表达清晰，整体通顺流畅。里面不乏好的短语和句子。文中用到了一些好的句式 I know you need new members for your volunteer group and I want to be one of them.；I will try my best to help the kids and cheer them up by telling them funny stories也让文章增色不少。