Question

10．为了使同学们更加健康快乐地成长，学校决定向同学们征求建议．假如你是王涛，用英语向校长写一篇80个词左右的建议信．注意：文中应包含所有要点，并适当发挥；不能出现真实的校名和姓名．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．

Dear Headmaster，
I'm very glad to write a letter to you．These days we are talking about how to have a better school life．Here are some of my suggestions．First，I hope our school will                                                     
Hope my suggestions will be helpful．Thanks for reading my letter!
Yours sincerely，
Wang Tao．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容提出一些为了使同学们更加健康快乐地成长的建议，给校长写一封信，注意信件的格式．时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1学校（1）经常开放图书馆（2）组织更多的课后活动；（3）更多的时间运动（4）考试少一点
2老师：（1）让课堂有趣；（2）课上说的少且清晰；（3）准时下课（4）家庭作业少一点
常用到的重点短语：
make+sth+adj让某物怎样
be interested in 感兴趣
what's more 再者
on time 准时
【高分句型】
1．And I suggest①our school should organize fewer exams②as well．
①suggest后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句．
②as well 也，放句末．
2．And①if they can talk less but more clearly in class，we will②be more interested in studying and have more time③to practice．
①if引导的条件状语从句，遵循主将从现的规则．
②be interested in 感兴趣
③动词不定式做目的状语．
3．①What's more，I hope ②they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．
①what's more 再者
②hope后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句．on time 准时

解答 Dear Headmaster，
     I'm very glad to write a letter to you．These days we are talking about how to have a better school life．Here are some of my suggestions．First，I hope our school will open the library more often．（经常开放图书馆）Second，I think our school can organize more after-class activities．（组织更多的课后活动） Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports，art and music．（更多的时间运动）And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well．（考试少一点）【高分句型】
As for our teachers，I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting．（让课堂有趣） And if they can talk less but more clearly in class，we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice．【高分句型】（课上说的少且清晰）What's more，I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．【高分句型】（准时下课；家庭作业少一点）
Hope my suggestions will be helpful．Thanks for reading my letter!
                                                                                                             
Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                             
Wang Tao

点评 这是一篇应用文，注意信件的格式，主要是提出建议，注意表达的委婉性，考生在平时的英语学习中需牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理，也可为文章增色不少