Question

【题目】Writing(作文) ：

Writing at least 60 words on the topic “A moving __________ of 2016”. (以“2016n年，让我感动的___________”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)。

盘点即将过去的2016年，你一定经历了许许多多的感动：一句温暖的话、一个会意的眼神，一份特别的礼物，一个温馨的画面......请你选取最触动你心弦的部分，写下来与大家分享。

（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）

Answer 1

【答案】例文

A moving present of 2016

Even now, well into the second decade of the 21st century, people tend to view video games as a guilty pleasure, however, my father doesn’t. When I got into the last year of junior middle school, he bought me a PS4 instead of endless exercise books. What he told me on that day is still fresh in my mind. He said that if you thought the time was right, you could enjoy the PS4. Just then, I saw a faint smile on his face, which was the best present of 2016. It not only encouraged me but also moved me a lot.

【解析】

1. 题干解读：该题目属于记叙文，也是话题作文，话题是“A moving present of 2016”。本文时态主要是一般现在时和一般过去时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，根据主题列出提纲。