Question

【题目】为了帮助中学生健康成长，某英文报开辟了Heart-to-heart专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中他向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日学习压力大，容易发脾气，觉得家庭、学校规则太多，与父母、老师、同学相处不好，常常要和他们争吵……使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下：1. 表示理解并给予安慰； 2. 提出建议并说明理由。
注意： 1. 词数：80左右； 2. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 3. 信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：have too much study pressure; be angry easily; too many rules; argue with... ; be allowed to do; it's a good way to do... communicate with; relax…
Hi Worried,
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. Teenagers……
Yours,
Jamie

Answer 1

【答案】Hi Worried:
I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:
First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends，as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger .And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
Yours，
Jamie
【解析】
写作思路：
（1）确定主题，为写信人解答困惑。
（2）确定写作顺序——分三段，以总分总结构进行。
（3）确定每段内容：第一段，总起，向对方表达慰问，使用给出的首句即可；第二段，分点给出建议，并加上自己的内容；第三段，总结全文，并希望对方心情可以快点好起来。