Question

【题目】假如你是李雷，你曾经去过北京两次，在北京做过很多事情，根据下面的图片提示写一篇小短文。短文不少于六、七个句子.

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Answer 1

【答案】

My name is Li Lei. I have been to Beijing twice. I did many things there. Last summer I went to Beijing with my parents. First we went to the Great Wall because it is considered one of the seven wonders in the world. There we saw many tourists from different countries. Second we went to the Summer Palace and Tian 'anmen square. Finally we came to visit some hutongs and enjoyed the Beijing Opera. Then we went to Wangfu Street, where we tasted Beijing Duck. In the trip we took many photos which can call up our memories so we were very happy though we were tired. Beijing is a beautiful city and I love it very much.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇根据图片提示而完成的作文。根据图片内容可知本文主要考查一般过去时态，人称为单数第一人称，写作前，要认真观察图片，看清图片所呈现的地点，物品。运用恰当的语言去描述，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己的感受。

写作亮点：这篇短文简明、扼要地描述了自己在北京所做的一些事件。时态运用非常准确。并且并包含了图片中所列举的全部信息，介绍时条理清晰，有条不紊，复合句的使用In the trip we took many photos which can call up our memories so we were very happy though we were tired.可见作者的写作功底，是一篇不错的英语范文。