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15．初中的学习即将结束，新的高中生活将要到来．假如你是李明，请你用英文给你的班主任写一封信，讲述你初中生涯中的一两件让你感动的事情，同时告诉她对于即将到来的生活所做出的简单计划．
注意：1．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称等信息；
2．词数：80词左右，结尾已经给出，不计入总次数；
3．请将信的内容和格式完整的呈现在答题卡上．
Dear Miss Zhang，
How time flies！My life in junior school will come to an end soon．Life was happy in the past three years but one bad thing in my mind is that I failed an important exam last year．I didn't prepare for the exam because I played computer games too much those days，which made my parents and you upset and worried．I will never forget that day when you talked with me face to face．It's a pity that I failed an exam but I am happy that I learned a lesson from this failure with your help．That is，no pains m no gains，Hard work leads to success and no one can have a harvest without any effort．Therefore，I will study harder than ever．I won't waste my valuable time any more．
Best wishes!

Yours，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Life was happy in the past three years ①but one bad thing in my mind is ②that I failed an important exam last year．在过去的三年里，生活是快乐的，但在我的脑海里有一件糟糕的事情是，我去年一个重要的考试不及格．
①but为转折连词，前后分句构成转折关系．
②that位于系动词is之后，引导表语从句．
高分句型二：
I didn't prepare for the exam①because I played computer games too much those days，②which ③made my parents and you upset and worried．我没有准备考试，因为那些日子我玩电脑游戏太多，这使我的父母和你感到烦恼和担心．
①because引导的原因状语从句．
②which引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰前面的整个句子．
③make sb+adj使得某人怎样，形容词作宾补．

解答 Dear Miss Zhang，
How time flies!My life in junior school will come to an end soon．【点题，引出下文】Life was happy in the past three years but one bad thing in my mind is that I failed an important exam last year．【高分句型】I didn't prepare for the exam because I played computer games too much those days，which made my parents and you upset and worried．【高分句型】I will never forget that day when you talked with me face to face．It's a pity that I failed an exam but I am happy that I learned  a lesson from this failure with your help．That is，no pains m no gains，Hard work leads to success and no one can have a harvest without any effort．【讲述初中生涯中的一件让我感动的事情】
  Therefore，I will study harder than ever．I won't waste my valuable time any more．【对于即将到来的生活所做出的简单计划】
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Ming．

点评 本篇作文由于提纲材料本身决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，命题者的意图往往较容易领悟，考生在审题上一般不会出现障碍．可根据内容要点提示运用相关的句型结构灵活的展开作文．考生需注意不要逐词逐句地进行翻译，所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．