题目内容
请以“My dream”为题，写一篇短文。
1. 语句通顺流畅，时态正确。
2. 字数在80个字左右。
Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I’m very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.
To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。话题贴近学生学习生活，学生有较大的发挥空间。动笔前要认真审题，挖掘深层内涵，勾勒要点，并适当发挥。根据话题可知本文主要是第一人称，行文时注意时态语及主谓一致问题，同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文内容表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，使文章自然流畅。同时，使用了一些常用的句式和短语，如：be friendly to sb、cheered sb up、With the help of、Since then、hoped to do sth、In order to、as much as possible、help sb out of、come true等，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累，牢记一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
考点：话题作文。
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How important is music? When they are asked this question, students and parents usually answer that music is nice, but not very important. It is often considered only as fun, but not the first choice for education. This opinion is shortsighted(短视的). In fact, music education is necessary and important for all students.
Music tells us who we are. Music shows people’s thinking and values, as well as the social environment it came from. just as Mozart music is a lifestyle, rock music is also a lifestyle.
Music provides a kind of ability to know the world in a different way. Science explains how the sun rises and sets. Music studies the emotive(情感的) meanings. We need every possible way to discover and respond(回应) to our world because no one way can get it all.
Music is a form of thought, as powerful as science. It is a way we human beings “talk” to each other. Through the language we express our feelings, our discoveries, our ideas and our hopes so that they can be shared with others. When we do not let our children receive good music education, we take away from them the meanings that music expresses. Science does not tell us what it means to be human. Music does.
So music education i
s much more necessary than people generally realize.
1.__________________________ is of great importance | |||
Introduction | Shortsighted opinion: Music is only a way of fun, not the top choice for education. Truth: music education is important for all students. | ||
Main Body | A way to tell who we are | Music not only shows the social environment it came form but also expresses people’s 2. _____________________. | |
A way to know the world | We need discover and respond to our world because 3. ___________. | ||
Science explains how nature goes. | Music studies the 4._________ of man and nature. | ||
A way to communicate with each other | We use music to share our feelings, discoveries, ideas and hopes with others. | ||
Music, different from 5._________________, tells us what it means to be human. | |||
Conclusion | Music education is necessary. | ||
