Question

10．下面有几条从"美国中学生守则"中摘录的校规．请你参照这些内容，给你们学校制定一条校规，并用事实说明制定该校规的理由．
American school rules
1．Don't cheat while taking a test．
2．You may talk to your teacher in your seat．
3．Please raise your hand when answering questions．
要求：
1）不使用真实的校名、人名等相关信息．不使用上面出现的校规．
2）内容完整，书写整齐．词数80左右．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数．
    I want to make a school rule．It is
                                               

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
So I think it's bad for students to take mobile phones to school．所以我认为学生带手机去学校是不好的．
 I think 后为宾语从句作think的宾语，省略了关系代词that．
宾语从句中为固定句型It+be+形容词+for sb to do sth的使用，意为：对于某人做什么是…的；it为形式主语，后面的不定式为真正的主语．
高分句型二：
It affects not only themselves but also other students．它不仅影响自己，也影响其他学生．
not only…but also…不但…而且…这里是连接两个并列的宾语．

解答 I want to make a school rule．It's"Don't take mobile phones to school．"【制定的校规是什么】
Many of my classmates take mobile phones to school．They use them to play games．Sometimes they send messages to each other in class．Sometimes they read novels at night and often feel tired and sleepy in class the next day．Sometimes they even use phones to cheat in exams．【用事实说明为什么制定此校规】
So I think it's bad for students to take mobile phones to school．【高分句型一】It affects not only themselves but also other students．【高分句型二】What's more，the students with phones may not be concentrated on their studies．Phones cost their parents'money．【结合手机的不良影响进一步说明制定该校规的理由】

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