Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你们学校的校刊近期开辟了英文专栏，征集发生在大家身边的感人故事。请你根据以下图片提示，写一篇短文，为该专栏投稿。

要求：

1. 文中至少使用一个含有过去进行时的句子；

2. 100词左右，可适当发挥。

参考词汇：穿着破烂衣衫 be in rags

Answer 1

【答案】On a cold morning, while I was eating breakfast in a fast food restaurant, I saw an old man. He was in rags. He seemed cold and hungry. But he didn’t have money to buy anything to eat. When the old man was leaving, a girl went to him and gave him a hamburger and some milk. The old man thanked the girl and the girl left with a smile. What the girl did touched me a lot. Maybe we don’t have much money, but we can still do something to help those in need.

【解析】解析：这是一篇看图作文，让我们根据图片的内容提示写一篇感人故事，需要我们发挥自己的想象力、创造力和思维力来完成写作。故事内容要点包括：故事讲述及作者感受。“故事”是已经发生了，全文要用一般过去时态，陈述故事时用第三人称，讲述感受时用第一人称。写作时，注意连词的恰当运用，使上下文联系紧密、过渡自然。注意一些重要词汇：on a cold morning在一个寒冷的早上；cold and hungry又冷又饿；with a smile微笑着等的运用。