Question

李梅在学习英语上遇到了困难，请以Betty的名义向她提出一些建议帮助她提高英语，内容须包含所给要点，可适当拓展。开头已给出，不少于60词。（15分）

内容要点：

1. 读英语报纸，听英语广播；

2. 看英文电影，用英语和朋友交谈；

3. 订正错误；

4. 参加英语俱乐部。

5. ……

Dear Li Mei,

I heard that you have some difficulties in learning English. I’d like to give you some advice.

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Yours,

Betty

 

Answer 1

Dear Li Mei,

I heard that you have some difficulties in learning English. I’d like to give you some advice.

How do you study? Everyone learns English in different ways. I think the best way to improve your English is to improve your English skills—listening, speaking, reading ,and writing. We should practice them every day. we should remember more words and grammar. Reading more English story books or novels .Watching more English cartoon TVs or movies. Listening English tapes and repeating after the speaker. Second you are not afraid to make any mistakes you speak English as much as possible. Third you ask the teachers when you don’t understand any knowledge .It’s very good for you if you are interested in English . You will find studying English is interesting and helpful. Fourth, ，you can join an English club. One more thing remember “Practice makes perfect”! I hope everyone makes progress.

Yours,

Betty

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。题目给出了文章要点。在写作时，注意文章的结构要清晰，不要漏掉信息点。很明显该文章主要用一般现在时态。写作时要注意句子的完整性，主谓一致。可以适当使用一些连接词，诗文章更紧凑，逻辑更清晰。

【亮点说明】这片文章结构清晰明了，写出了题目要求的每个要点。如使用了副词second、third、fourth使得文章非常条理。也使用了一些复合句如You will find studying English is interesting and helpful. I hope everyone makes progress.这些都为文章增色不少。

考点：话题作文。