Question

【题目】有人喜欢住在城里，有人喜欢住在乡下，你喜欢住在哪里呢？请写一篇70个词左右的短文，说说你喜欢住在那里的理由。

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Answer 1

【答案】Some people like living in the city. Some people like living in the countryside. I like living in the city. There are different kinds of shops in the cities. You can buy many things. When you go out, you can take a bus, a subway or a taxi. The schools in the city are nice and big. Although (虽然) cities are often noisy and the living cost is high, I like living in the city.

【解析】

亮点这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如like doing; live in; in the countryside; different kinds of; take a bus, a subway or a taxi; nice and big; do some cleaning; cook some food ;get home等。而When you go out, you can take a bus, a subway or a taxi. / Although (虽然) cities are often noisy and the living cost is high, I like living in the city.等多种状语从句的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。