Question

书面表达 （本大题共10分）

假如你叫Billy，是无锡市某初级中学的一名九年级学生，学校将组织由学生推选“十佳教师”的评选活动。你准备写一封推荐信给校长Mr Smith，推荐你的英语老师Mrs Lin当选，请你根据要点提示写一封电子邮件给Mr Smith。

内容要点如下：

1.四十几岁，教英语已有十几年；

2.耐心，为我们重复语法规则；

3.严格，要求我们尽可能经常复习所学内容；

4.善良并充满爱心，……

5.令我们惊讶的是……

注意：

1. 推荐信须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

2. 第4、5要点的内容须用2～3句话作适当发挥；

3. 词数80个左右，推荐信的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing to recommend our English teacher Mrs Lin as one of the top ten teachers.

 

 

 

 

I think Mrs Lin is the most suitable person to be the top teacher. I hope that you agree with us.

Yours sincerely,

Billy

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing to recommend our English teacher Mrs Lin as one of the top ten teachers. She’s in her forties and has taught English for over ten years. She’s patient enough to repeat grammar rules for us. She is strict with us. She requires us to go over what we’ve learnt as often as possible. She’s also kind and has a heart full of love. She’s willing to offer help to the students in trouble. To our surprise, she donates her money to three poor students in a village in the west of China every year.

I think Mrs Lin is the most suitable person to be the top teacher. I hope that you agree with us.

Yours sincerely,

Billy

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇应用文写作，写一封电子邮件。由于给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

【亮点说明】

这篇短文主要是作者写了一封电子邮件向Mr Smith校长推荐自己心目中的“十佳教师”。文章中使用了大量的固定句式和短语，使文章增色不少.如: She’s patient enough to repeat grammar rules for us；She’s willing to offer help to the students in trouble.牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：话题作文。