题目内容

(20分)

你以前的小学同学贾斯汀(Justin)和他的父母一起搬到了城里,并在那里学习生活,那里学习很紧张,整天很忙。请根据下面的要点,以“My good friend ---Justin”为题,写一篇介绍Justin学习和生活的一篇文章,可适当扩展,字数70字左右,开头不计入总字数。

姓名

Justin在新东方学校(New Oriental school)读七年级

年龄

13岁 和爸爸妈妈住在一所公寓里

学校

学校大、漂亮、很近,步行上学,学校老师和同学友好热心。

爱好

游泳;篮球 擅长绘画、数学;很少看电视

个性

和善,乐于助人 常常在学习上帮助他人

 

 

 

 

 

 

My good friend ---Justin

Justin is my good friend. He is 13years old now. He lives with his parents in a apartment building near the school. He’s in Grade 7 of New Oriental school. This school is big and beautiful. Justin lives nears the school, so he walks to school every day. His teachers and classmates are all friendly and helpful. He likes swimming, playing basketball math and he is good at drawing. He is friendly to everyone and we all like him.

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇提纲类作文,介绍自己的朋友。本题给出的材料较为详细,动笔前要先认真阅读要点,然后围绕要点展开写作。根据所给材料内容,可知本文主要用第三人称,一般现在时态进行叙述.写作中注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题。注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用的句式短语较为简单. 主要是主谓结构。但是通过一些这些简单句式的灵活搭配,使得文章避免单纯的重复,使得短文既通俗易懂又逻辑清楚。让我们对作者的朋友西门有了一个比较全面的了解,不失为一篇上等作文。

考点:考查提纲类作文

 

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