Question

【题目】【湖南省张家界市2015年中考英语试题】写段落（共1题，满分15 ）

根据图文提示写一篇短文介绍Le Pen.（要写标题，并适当补充内容使文意连贯完整。不少于50词。）

	What is it?	Le Pen.
	What is it used for?	Writing and playing music.
	Why can it play music?	Because it has a music player planted inside.
	How can it play music?	Write on paper with it.

Answer 1

【答案】

Writing with music

This is Le Pen. It is a pen. You can use it to write. But it is not only a pen but also a music player. With a music player planted inside, Le Pen plays music while you write on paper. The music stops when you stop writing. So if you want to enjoy more of your favorite songs, keep on writing. Do you like listening to music while doing homework? If you do ,you will like Le Pen.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是图表式作文，图表式作文是说明文的一种，要认真解读图表，切勿疏漏重要数据信息和细节提示，不必每个数据都涉及，但重要数据必须提到。对图表中的内容分析、数据说明一定要简明扼要，尽量使用简单句，因为复杂的句式往往起不到清晰表达的效果。结论性的表达要从图表信息分析或数据归纳而来，这样才能使得语言有说服力，切忌主观判断，更不能主观臆造。

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