Question

书面表达（本题有1小题；满分10分）

根据所给内容写一篇约70字左右的短文。文章首句和末句已给出。

要求:书写工整，语句通顺，结构完整，大小写正确。

	Name	Chen Jie
From	China
Age	13
School	Class 4, Grade 1, Jinsha No.2 Middle School
Favourite sports	Swimming, basketball
Things can do	Play the piano
Father’s job	A teacher ( No.1 Middle School)
Mother’s job	A manager ( a hotel )

Hello ,I am a nice girl!_____________________________________________

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Let’s be friends.

 

Answer 1

My name is Chen Jie. I’m from china and I’m Chinese. I’m 13 years old. I’m in Class 4, Grade 1 in Jinsha No. 2 Middle School. I like swimming and playing basketball. I can play tennis but I can’t play table tennis. There are three people in my family. They are my father, mother and me. My father is a teacher in No.1 Middle School. My mother is a manager in a hotel. I love them.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇让我们介绍陈杰的个人简介情况和她的爸爸妈妈的情况。小作者把要求写的几点都表述得很清晰。另外，写作时，小作者还注意了语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者把列举的要点都写了进去。这些内容也比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如I like swimming and playing basketball. I can play tennis but I can’t play table tennis.用上了些连词。

考点：提纲类作文。