Question

【题目】书面表达

写一写自己的爱好，提示词：like don’t like

Answer 1

【答案】I like doing sports with my friends because it is good for our health.We often play basketball or table tennis near my home.I also like reading books and I can learn more knowledge.I like surfing the internet because I can relax myself very much.I can find some new freinds and chat with them.What's more,I enjoy listening to music.

I don't like sweeping the floor because my mother always says that I cann't clean it.I don't like cooking.

【解析】

从题目要求“写一写自己的爱好”可知本篇文章的人称要用第一人称，时态上要用一般现在时。在写喜欢或不喜欢的同时可以加上一些喜欢或不喜欢的原因。 另外写作时可以用到一些连词，使文章显得更有连贯性，

这是一篇比较优秀的文章，首先内容符合文章的要求，写自己的爱好，喜欢或不喜欢，其次，内容上非常的充实，而且句子和句子中间用到一些连词或副词，例如“because”，“and” “What's more” “also”等，使得文章句式不至于太单一。另外，文章也很有次序，先写喜欢，再写不喜欢。