Question

14．我们周围有很多值得尊敬的人，家长，老师，朋友…你最尊敬的人是谁呢？
某英文报纸以"我最尊敬的人（The person I respect most）"为题进行征文，请你投稿．介绍一下你最尊敬的人是谁，你为什么尊敬他/她，你从他/她身上学到了什么．
提示词语：important，learn，help…
The person I respect most
Mymother is the person I respect most．She plays an important role in my life，not only as a mother but also as a friend．
Asa mother，she takes good care of the family and she is never upset about mymistakes．She works hard in the company．She's always warm-hearted and ready tohelp others．She sets a good example to me．I have learned to work hard andrespect people around．As a friend，she knows a lot about me and gives me helpwhenever it's necessary．
Mymother has a great influence on me and I respect her most．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
She ①plays an important role in my life，②not only as a mother but also as a friend．她在我的生活中起着重要的作用，不仅作为一个母亲，而且作为一个朋友．
①play an important role in 在…中起重要作用
②not only…but also…不但…而且…连接前后两个对等的成分
高分句型二：
①As a friend，she knows a lot about me and gives me help ②whenever it's necessary．作为一个朋友，每当必要的时候她很了解我并给我帮助．
①as介词，作为
②whenever引导的时间状语从句，每当…

解答 One possible version：
The person I respect most
My mother is the person I respect most．She plays an important role in my life，not only as a mother but also as a friend．【高分句型一】【我最尊敬的人是谁】
As a mother，she takes good care of the family and she is never upset about mymistakes．She works hard in the company．She's always warm-hearted and ready to help others．She sets a good example to me．I have learned to work hard and respect people around．As a friend，she knows a lot about me and gives me help whenever it's necessary．【高分句型二】【尊敬的原因及从她身上学到了什么】
My mother has a great influence on me and I respect her most．

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