Question

【题目】动物是人类的朋友，可是由于人类环保意识不够，很多动物正处于濒临灭绝的危险境地。请根据下面表格的提示，介绍一下鲸鱼以及人类怎样保护它们。

注意：文章内容要包括表格中的提示，可适当拓展,不少于80词,字迹工整，具有可读性（15分）

What do they look like?

Where do they live?

What do they eat?

What can they do?

Why do some of them have to be protected?

How can we protect them?

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Answer 1

【答案】Whale are huge animals. They live in the sea and eat small fish and other sea life. One

interesting fact is that whales can jump high out of water. Some kinds of whales are in danger because humans catch them for meat, fat ,and oil, and use whale parts to make candles and soap. Whales are also in danger from water pollution. We should protect whales by making rules on whale protection and by not putting rubbish into the sea. I think people should learn more about whales. .I sincerely hope that we can make our effort to save them!

【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以“保护动物”为话题，结合所给的写作材料，写出鯨的外形、居住环境、生活习性等，最后要说明保护鯨的原因及措施。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中kinds of，be in danger, jump high out of, put...into..., learn about, make one’s effort 等词组的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中还多处使用了宾语从句、表语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得学习。