Question

【题目】 Writing.

Thirty-year- old Sophie has been bullied(欺凌)at school for over two years. She had her bag, keys and mobile phones stolen. Have you ever got in campus bully? Please write a passage with 80-120 words about your own opinions. Your passage should include the following points:

1. Some common forms of bullying you’ve seen or experienced. (At least two examples)

2. Some effects(影响) on the students who have been bullied at school. (At least two effects)

3. Some solutions you consider to solve the problem. (At least three solutions)

Answer 1

【答案】Bullying, as far as I know, isprevalentin secondary schools. Most of us have seen or even experienced that more or less. I saw John had his money stolen .Sometimes he was made to do the cleaning for others. John often feels afraid and can’t concentrate on his study. Some bullying leads to tragedy consequences, which draw public attention nationwide.

First, because students spend most of their time in school and it's the school's responsibility to protect them andstopany forms of bullying. Schools should make rules for it.Second, as we all know, parents are the best teachers for children in this world. So they are responsible for their children.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍学校的欺凌事件。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I saw……，Sometimes he was made to……，John often feels……，because students spend……，Schools should……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。