Question

书面表达（满分20分）

假设你是Anna， 请代表全班同学给校长写一封推荐Daniel为本学期最佳学生奖的推荐信。

能力	聪明，各门功课优秀，擅长英语，有空时经常在英语俱乐部帮忙
个性	才思敏捷，计划周密，善良，乐于助人
事迹	经常参加一些为贫困儿童募集衣服，书本的活动；帮助同学学习英语；上周，一个5岁男孩迷路，他帮助孩子找到家；上周末，他从大火里救出了一个老人

要求：1. 词数70左右。 2. 不要遗漏要点。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

I would like to tell you about my favorit classmate Daniel, who I believe should receive the Best Student Award of the year.Daniel is an excellent student. She got good grades in all the courses. She is good at English ,she often offers help at the English club.She is smart and thoughtful. She is also friendly and considerate, always thinking of others first. She Often gives away her clothes and books to the poor children .She also helps the students to learn English; Last week, a 5-year-old boy lost, he helped him find his home

Last weekend when she was on her way home, she rescued an old man from the fire, and took care of him until his family arrived..

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如I would like to tell you about my favorit classmate Daniel, who I believe should receive the Best Student Award of the year. She is also friendly and considerate, always thinking of others first.等，also等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

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