Question

【题目】作文.

提示：Peter 收藏了很多体育用品。有5个棒球球棒，8个足球， 3个网球球拍， 1个乒乓球拍，4个篮球， 7个排球。（数字用英语表示）。他热爱运动，每天都参加运动。

不少于40词。

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Answer 1

【答案】Peter has a great sports collection. He has five baseball bats, eight soccer balls, three tennis rackets, one ping-pong bat, four basketballs and seven volleyballs. He likes sports. He plays sports every day.

【解析】【亮点说明】这篇习作的思路清晰，表达流畅，中心明确。文中使用了多种句式，如Peter has a great sports collection. / He likes sports./ He plays sports every day.。而长句的运用是本文的亮点，He has five baseball bats, eight soccer balls, three tennis rackets, one ping-pong bat, four basketballs and seven volleyballs.，为文章增色不少。