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However,we only have two electric fans in the dining hall,so we feel uncomfortable to have meals there in summer. I think more electric fans should be fixed.Besides,there are not enough toilets for girls in the teaching building.As a result,many girls are often late for class after waiting a long time in the toilets during the breaks. Why not build more toilets for girl students?
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