Question

【题目】书面表达

发展中的中国，使我们的生活变得越来越好。请根据下面提示，以“Changes around us”为题用英语写一篇短文。

要求：1．不得使用真实的姓名和学校名；2．短文需要包括所有要点，并适当发挥。3．词数不少于90词 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。

Changes around us

Great changes have taken place in our life around us．___________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Changes around us

Great changes have taken place in our life around us. We have more opportunities to go abroad. We can travel online even at home. It became a reality to enjoy the beauty of the world without going out. Through the Internet, we can do more reading and more group work. It is very helpful for our work and studies. In transportation, besides driving, we can also take high-speed trains. There are many new high ways and flyovers. It's a few hours' journey from my hometown to Beijing.

Shopping is easy, too. We can go to any shops and supermarkets to select anything we like. I feel happy and comfortable to live in such a society.

【解析】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如take place，in our life，around us，go abroad，travel online，become a reality，do more reading，be helpful for，from my hometown to Beijing，live in such a society等。而非谓语动词结构It became a reality to enjoy the beauty of the world without going out./ Shopping is easy, too./ I feel happy and comfortable to live in such a society.和复杂从句结构We can go to any shops and supermarkets to select anything we like.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。