Question

【题目】随着网络的发展、人们消费观念的转变， 购物方式也在悄然的发生变化。“网购” 成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示， 写一篇网上购物的文章。

优点 (advantage)	1.不需要出门；节约时间；避免拥挤、劳累
	2.价格通常比较便宜
	3.可供选择的范围广，品种多
缺点 (disadvantage)	1.只看到图片， 看不到商品本身
	2.容易购买大量不太需要的东西， 造成浪费
你的观点	……

提示词汇：网购shopping online; 商品 goods; 导致 cause
注意：1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面，可适当发挥；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称；3.词数：100词左右，文章开头已给出，但不计入总数。
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.

Answer 1

【答案】 With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become fashionable. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping online has many advantages. You can buy what you're interested in on the Internet without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more kinds of goods, and the prices are usually lower. However, every coin has two sides. Shopping online has many disadvantages, too. On one hand, it's very easy for you to buy goods that aren't like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That's a waste of money. All in all, I love shopping online. I think it's very convenient.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍网上购物的优点和缺点以及我的观点。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：many people are used to ……，You can……，and the prices are……，it's very easy for you to……，shopping online may cause……，I think……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。