Question

17．Write at least 60words on the topic"I'd like to make…feel happy"以《我想使…高兴》为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格．
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分．）
Suggested phrases and expressions（词组）：not afford to buy…； spend…doing something with somebody；bake something for somebody； make one's own present（s）； become healthier
I'd like to makemy mother feel happy．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Mother love is ①so great and selfless that I can never do too much ②to make my mother feel happy ③in return．母亲的爱是如此的伟大和无私，我不能做太多，让我的母亲感到快乐以此来回报她．
①so+形容词或副词+that…如此…以至于…后引导结果状语从句．
②动词不定式作目的状语
③in return回报
高分句型二：
①After finishing my homework，I have ②spent most of my time③practicing baking with my father these days．在完成我的家庭作业之后，这些天我练习烤制蛋糕和爸爸一起度过了大部分的时间．
①after在…之后，作时间状语
②spend time（in） doing sth花费时间做某事
③practice doing sth练习做某事

解答 I'd like to make my mother feel happy
Mother love is so great and selfless that I can never do too much to make my mother feel happy in return【高分句型一】【点题，引出下文】
With the approach of Mother's Day，I want to extend my gratitude to my dear mom．Since as a student，I can't afford to buy something expensive，such as perfume，clothes，I have decided to make my own present．Hard as I tried，it's never easy to bake a perfect cake for the first time．After finishing my homework，I have spent most of my time practicing baking with my father these days．【高分句型二】I just can't wait to share the gift for her and see the big smile on her face．【怎样使妈妈高兴】

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