Question

【题目】 在我们的生活中，总有让我们钦佩的人，你钦佩的人是谁？请以“ The Person Who I Admire”为题，简要介绍该人并以具体事例来说明你钦佩他/她的理由。

要求：

1. 条理清晰，内容完整；

2. 语句通顺，语法准确，书写工整；

3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;

4. 不少于80词。（题目已给出，不占字数）

Answer 1

【答案】例文

The Person Who I Admire

Everyone has someone he admires most，who may be a scientist, a writer musician or a movie super star. But as for me, the most admirable person is my dearest mother.

My mother is an ordinary woman. She is not very beautiful but very kind and enthusiastic Although she doesn't have high education，she is very capable and excellent in social contact and bargaining. She loves me and my brother, trying to give us the comfortable surroundings to study and live in.

I learn to be an optimistic person with strong mind from my mother. She also teaches me that no pains, no gains. Only when you work hard, can your dream come true. These lessons have a great influence on my life.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文要求以“ The Person Who I Admire”为题写篇英语短文。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；再根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡平稳、自然流畅。