Question

【题目】随着手机的普及，越来越多的人痴迷于手机，纷纷加入低头族。请你参考下图反映的现象及内容提示，围绕“拒为低头族”（stop phubbing），用英语写一篇80词左右短文。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

内容提示：

1.我身边也有很多低头族，非常喜欢玩手机。

2.他们不停用手机发信息、上网、玩游戏或拍照。

3.影响学习和生活。上课或工作时间玩手机极大浪费时间。

4.引发健康问题，长时间玩手机引发眼、背、颈痛。

Nowadays, lots of people have their own mobile phones, but more and more people are crazy about their mobile phones. It is common to see people staring at their mobile phone everywhere all the time, taking no notice of the people around them. ________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays, lots of people have their own mobile phones, but more and more people are crazy about their mobile phones. It is common to see people staring at their mobile phone everywhere all the time, taking no notice of the people around them.

There is a lot of phubbing around me. They like playing with mobile phones very much. They can’t stop sending text messages, surfing the Internet, playing mobile games and even taking photos with mobile phones.

However, phubbing influences /affects not only our studies, but also our life. Phubbing, whether playing phone games or sending text message, especially in class or at work, is a big waste of time. What’s more, it can lead to health problems. For example, using a mobile phone too much can cause eyes or back and neck pain.

In my opinion, it is time for us to throw away our phones and raise our heads. We should do more exercise and take part in real-life activities. When we use phones properly we can live a happy life.

【解析】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读写作提示并认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。在检查环节，考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。