Question

【题目】书面表达（15分）

一年前Timmy作为一名交换生来到北京参加了“体验中国”的活动。在学习期满即将回到英国之际，他在校园网的留言板上写下自己在这里学习和生活的情况和感受。请根据所给提示，帮助Timmy完成这则留言。（60词左右）

提示：1．与同学共同生活、相互学习，参加学校俱乐部。

2．游览名胜古迹(place of interest)；品尝美食，了解中国文化和历史。

3．感谢老师和同学的帮助。

要求：语言规范、字迹工整；开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。

Timmy—June 20, 2013, 10∶32

I’ve been here for a year.

Answer 1

【答案】

Timmy—June 20, 2013, 10∶32

I've been here for a year. I enjoyed living here very much. I lived and studied with Chinese students.

After school I often joined some clubs. During the year I visited many places of interest. They are really great. And I enjoyed the delicious food here. Now I've learned more about Chinese history and culture.

Thanks for your help.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如After school I often joined some clubs. During the year I visited many places of interest. They are really great. And I enjoyed the delicious food here. Now I've learned more about Chinese history and culture.

等等。