Question

【题目】书面表达

升入八年级的你一定对自己和好朋友又有了新的认识，请介绍你和你的好朋友在外貌、性格；饮食、运动、学习和对电视节目的喜爱方面的不同点和相同点。（60词左右）

My friend and I

Answer 1

【答案】

My friend and I

My name isTom. I have a good friend, his name is Peter.

Peter is the same age as me. But we are quite different in many ways. I am tall, but Peter is shorter than me .I am an outgoing boy. My friends think I am funny and make them laugh. But Peter is more serious than me., he never tells jokes. As for hobbies, I like sports best when I am free. But Peter would like to stay at home to read books and listen to music in his free time.

I think it’s not necessary to be the same. We often help each other and share everything together.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。动笔前要认真思考，首先确立写作要点。根据题目要求可知本文主要是考查比较级，下笔时要考虑好比较级的句型，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：文中运用了大量比较的内容，使文章结构鲜明内容丰富。先写相同点年龄，运用the same as句型。再着重写不同点，运用许多固定句式，为文章增色不少，如make them laugh， as for，when I am free， would like to do sth，in sb’s spare time。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。