Question

【题目】书面表达。

依照下列问句，以My Hobbies为题写一篇60词左右的短文。

1. What hobbies did you use to have? Why did you like them?

2. What hobbies do you have now? Why do you like them?

3. What different hobbies do you have in different seasons?

My Hobbies

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My Hobbies

Different people have different hobbies. I used to ride a bike and read story books. They could give us lots of knowledge. I keep cats and dogs. I thought pets were very friendly and lovely, but now I like listening to music and chatting on the Internet, because music can relax me after the daily work and chatting can bring me happiness and friendship.

I have different hobbies in different seasons. In spring I like flying kites. In summer I go swimming. I often climb hills in the fall. I like making snowmen best in winter.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的爱好。结合所给材料，可知本文主要采用一般过去时和一般现在时态，人称为单数第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如： I used to ...，I thought ...，because music can...，I have ...，I like...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我过去的爱好以及原因，接下来介绍我现在的爱好以及理由，最后指出我不同的季节有不同的爱好。此处用了give sb sth, lots of, like doing sth, on the Internet, bring sb sth, go swimming 等这些词组，也让文章增色不少。