Question

【题目】国家现在放开了二胎政策，很多人认为有一个兄弟姐妹很好，你认为呢？根据提示写一篇短文。

1．父母要花费更多时间和金钱，两个孩子会生气打闹；

2．有玩伴，不孤独，学会照顾别人，学会分享等；

3．……

注意：70词左右；短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Answer 1

【答案】I am the only child in my family. I can get everything I want. If I have a sister or brother, my parents won't spend much time with me and they will spend more money in daily life. Two children may make noise at home. But children can learn to share something with others. They can look after each other. And they won't feel lonely. Anyway, I think two-child policy is good.

【解析】

本文属于话题作文，表达针对国家开放二胎政策不同的人不同的观点，并阐述自己的观点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯、符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如spend with、make noise、share...with...、look after、anyway以及“If I have a sister or brother, my parents won't spend much time with me and they will spend more money in daily life”中if引导的条件句用一般现在时，主句用一般将来时，即“主将从现”原则，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯、用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯。