Question

【题目】 假如你是李明，请根据以下信息完成一篇倡议书，要点如下：

1. 现在很多学生作业多，没有时间锻炼身体，很少参加户外活动；

2. 目前共享单车很受欢迎，建议同学们经常骑车锻炼身体；

3. 共享单车借还非常方便，也利于环保；

4. 就锻炼身体补充一两点建议。

注意：

1. 词数60-80；

2. 内容要连贯得体。

参考词汇：outdoor activities户外活动；sharing bikes共享单车；environment环境

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Answer 1

【答案】例文

　　Hello, everyone I'm Liming. Nowadays, many students have too much homework. So they don't have time to take exercise. And they seldom take part in outdoor activities. At present, bicycle sharing is very popular. I suggest we can do exercises by bikes. And bicycle sharing is also very convenient and it’s good for the environment protection.

　Here are other suggestions about exercise. First of all, we can run in the morning. Secondly, we can swim or play basketball in the weekend. We should make sure to exercise for at least an hour every day.

　 Let's take action!

【解析】

1、题干阅读提干，这是一篇倡导文章，倡导的是学生要多锻炼。例文分为三段，第一段是提出应该多锻炼，骑共享单车就是一个锻炼的方法，第二段提出建议，第三段发出倡议让我们行动起来吧。这类文章一般以一般现在时为主。

2、例文这是一篇优秀的例文，很好的完成了试题所给的任务，并且例文也符合英语语言语境。文章为一篇倡导学生多锻炼的文章，每一个任务点之间连接自然，文章井井有条。同时例文中也有一些亮点词句，增强了逻辑关系，增加上下意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

3、高分亮点：

短语：take exercise锻炼；take part in参加；be good for对...有益；make sure确定；at least至少；

句型：（1）And bicycle sharing is also very convenient and it’s good for the environment protection.骑共享单车很方便，并且对保护关键也有好处。be good for对...有好处；（2）We should make sure to exercise for at least an hour every day. make sure确保；at least至少。