Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是Liu Yi, 你的一位英国笔友来信询问你的生活和学习习惯。请你根据下面的表格，向他介绍你的近况。开头和结尾已给出。

要求：1. 书写美观，段落清晰；2标点正确，注意细节，不少于80个词。 3. 包含所有要点，可适当拓展；

个人信息	住在大卖场附近，它有五层的商店，是个购物和见朋友的好地方。
喜欢的节日	比较喜欢春节，因为春节期间可以观看焰火，穿新衣服、拿红包、拜访朋友….
	最喜欢万圣节，可以做南瓜灯笼，戴上面具乔装打扮并且玩一种游戏….
生活习惯和爱好	有健康的生活方式，平时不吃零食，爱吃水果和蔬菜。早睡早起， 经常做眼保健操和课间操以便保持健康,对集邮很感兴趣….
我的梦想是……..	…….

Dear Tom,

Thank you for your letter.

My home is near the mall. The mall is very big.

I like the

I also have a healthy lifestyle.

I hope

All the best,

Liu Yi

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

Thank you for your letter.

My home is near the mall. The mall is very big. It has five storeys and is a great place for shopping and friends. I like Spring Festival better because I can get many red packets and often visit the relatives and friends with my family. I can watch TV and play computer games for many hours .In the evening we can have a big dinner and watch fireworks .We have a good time.

I like Halloween best. On that day I can make pumpkin lanterns, wear masks, dress up and play a game“Treat or Trick”.

I also have a healthy lifestyle. I do not usually eat snacks.I love fruits and vegetables. I get up early in the morning and go to bed early in the evening.I often do eye exercises and do morning exercises during the break between classes in order to keep healthy.I am interested in collecting stamps.

I hope you have a healthy lifestyle.Can you tell me about you?

All the best,

Liu Yi

【解析】

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如thank for, Spring Festival，watch TV，play computer games，have a big dinner，have a good time，watch fireworks，dress up，play a game，a healthy lifestyle，do eye exercises，in order to，keep healthy，be interested in，collect stamps等。而I like Spring Festival better because I can get many red packets and often visit the relatives and friends with my family./ I often do eye exercises and do morning exercises during the break between classes in order to keep healthy.等复杂结构句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。