Question

【题目】假设你将代表你们班参加学校举办的有关“校园安全”的征文比赛。请你以“How to Make Our School Safer”为题写一篇英语征文，阐明同学们的观点，再写一两点你对校园安全的建议。80词左右。要点如下：

Classmates' opinions
1.Safety classes: teach safety in an easy way; learn to stay away from danger.
2.Sports safety: do warmup(热身) activities; drink water after playing sports.
3.Classroom safety: never do anything dangerous.
Your opinions	…

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Answer 1

【答案】How to Make Our School Safer

How to make our school safer? There are many activities that we can do. In safety classes, teachers can teach safety in an easy way and students should learn carefully to stay away from danger, such as fire and earthquakes.

When we have P．E. classes, we should always do warmup activities before playing sports and drink some water after playing sports. And we aren't supposed to do anything dangerous to get ourselves or others into trouble.

I think schools should provide us with more emergency practice. Maybe someday we can use the skills that we learn to save our lives.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文。要求你以“How to Make Our School Safer”为题写一篇英语征文，代表你们班参加学校举办的有关“校园安全”的征文比赛，阐明同学们的观点，再写一两点你对校园安全的建议。首先要认真审题，确定文章的中心；注意文章的文体、人称和时态。本文时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第一人称。在写作时注意连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等，还要检查字数是否符合要求，确保正确无误。