Question

作文 (20分)

请你以 My friend 为题，根据下列要点提示写一篇作文：

1. Kate，一个13岁女孩，是来自于七年级（3）班的一名学生；她的教室又大又亮，班上有60个学生；

2. 戴着眼镜，小眼睛，留着一头黑色长发；

3. 待人有好，爱好画画；

4. 学习刻苦，每天早上6点起床，晚上8点半睡觉；

5. 经常运动，想保持健康；

6. 她喜欢打乒乓球;在周末她喜欢听音乐。

要求：1. 语法正确，意思连贯，书写规范，要点齐全，适当拓展,不要逐句翻译。

2.字数80左右。

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Answer 1

My best friend

My best friend is Daniel. He is 13 years old. He studies in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 1, Grade 7. He is short and wears glasses. He is wearing a white T-shirt and a pair of blue jeans today. He looks smart. He has a healthy lifestyle. He often exercises and he seldom has hamburgers and coke. He thinks they are bad for his health. He is interested in drawing. And he likes playing computer games too. As a student, he is busy with his study. So he doesn’t have much time to play computer games. There is a shopping mall near his home. He often goes shopping there. And he thinks it’s a good place to buy things.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文要求按照所给的题目结合提示内容完成这篇介绍好朋友的作文。写作中要包含介绍朋友的几个方面：姓名、年龄、就读学校班级和外貌、性格及爱好，今天的穿着等进行陈述，表达出朋友的与众不同的特点等。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要是第三人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文全面、详尽地阐明了朋友的各项基本信息，并包含了文中所要求的全部内容。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语，包含形容词的准确使用为文章增色不少.如He looks smart. He has a healthy lifestyle.，are bad for，play computer games，go shopping，文中对于名词的使用准确恰当，如wearing a white T-shirt and a pair of blue jeans，have much time学习中再注意总结、牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。