Question

书面表达（15分）

中考体育中，你考得怎样？

写一篇80词左右的日记，记述你参加体育测试的经历及感受。

要求：1 内容充实，语言准确、流畅。

2．可参考下列词汇。

PE test体育测试 1000/ 800 race 1000/ 800米跑 long jump跳远 rope skipping跳绳 dribble 运球

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

April 18, 2010 Sunday Fine

Today I finished my PE test. As a boy I had three parts. One is the long jump, another is the 1000m race ,the other is dribble in basketball. I did better in the 1000m race. It took me 4 minutes and 20 seconds. But I didn’t do well in the long jump. I only jumped 1.86 meters. I often play basketball in my out-of-class activities. So I have thought I am sure of it. Finally, I got full marks in dribble. This time the PE test is part of the Senior High School entrance test. Most of us are serious about it.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。本文所给材料比较简略，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般过去时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: one…another一……另一；do well in在……做得好；Most of us are serious about it我们中的大多数人是认真的。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。