Question

【题目】“友善”是一种美德，它犹如阳光和雨露照耀并滋润着美德的形成。同学们，请奉献你的友善，为创建和谐社会做出贡献。

某英文网站正在开展以“友善待人、快乐生活”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你对他人提供善意帮助的经历。主要内容包括:你对友善行为的认识和理解，你平时做哪些友善的事情，以及你这样做的美好愿望。

提示词语:kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society

提示问题:What do you think of showing kindness to others?

How do you help them kindly in your daily life?

What do you dream about being kind to them?

It's our duty to show kindness to others around us. _________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our community, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.

I believe our society will become better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.

【解析】

本文属于话题作文，谈谈生活中你对他人提供善意帮助的经历。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。