Question

【题目】"读万卷书，行万里路"，研学旅行现在受到教育主管部门和学校的高度重视，也深受学生和家长的欢迎．假如你们学校的英文网站就研学旅行中需要注意的事项发帖，征集建议．请你根据以下要点写一篇短文，进行跟帖回复．

1．要点：

2．要求

（1）文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名等；

（2）语言要通顺，表达要正确；

（3）要求包含所有要点提示，为了行文需要，可适当拓展和增加要点；

（4）词数不少于60个英语单词，开头已给出，不计入总词．

3．参考词汇：

在危险中indanger报警callthepolice

Nowstudytripsarebecomingmoreandmorepopularwithparentsandstudents．What shouldwepayattentiontowhenwe'rehavingastudytrip？

Here'smyadvice．

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Answer 1

【答案】Now study trips are becoming more and more popular with parents and students. What should we pay attention to when we're having a study trip? Here's my advice.

First, we are supposed to eat healthily and safely. Eating the food that goes bad will do harm to our health. We should eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food. Second, it's important for us to follow the traffic rules. We mustn't go across the street when the traffic light is red. Third, if we are in danger, we should call the police for help in time. What's more, we should be careful when we use electricity. Last but not the least, it's dangerous to swim in the river. We mustn't swim alone.

In short, safety must come first!

【解析】

本文是材料作文，也是话题作文，话题是“读万卷书，行万里路”，根据表格中列举的要点，谈论研学旅行应注意的问题。能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作。根据内容提示可知本文使用的时态主要有一般现在时。写作时，列好提纲，注意使用连词，句型、句式，使文章整体意思连贯，表达流畅。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写，语法错误（时态，主谓一致等）。

高分句型一：Eating the food that goes bad will do harm to our health.吃变质的食物对健康有害。本句运用了定语从句the food that goes bad，另外Eating the food 动名词作主语。

高分句型二：Second, it's important for us to follow the traffic rules.其次，遵守交通规则对我们来说很重要。“It is +adj + for sb to do sth”这个句型中it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正主语。