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13．自从温州市政府推行"违必拆，六先拆"、"两拆两绿"、"拆围去丑"、"揭疤栽花"…等活动以来，相信同学们已经发现温州的变化：围墙拆了（remove enclosing wall）、垃圾少了、绿地多了、公园多了、空气清新了、玩的地方多了…温州变绿了，变美了很多！
请你结合以上内容谈一谈你对这些活动的看法以及你能为"美丽温州"做些什么，可适当拓展，写一篇短文，字数在100左右．（注意：文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名）Great changes have taken place in Wenzhou since the government took actions against illegal buildings．Wherever and whenever you go，you will see the enclosing walls have been removed；，rubbish becomes less； the green field gets big and big； the number of parks is larger and larger； the air turns fresher and fresher； we have more places to have fun．Wenzhou has become green．and is getting more and more beautiful．Every one of us should take part in the action to help keep Wenzhou more tidy and beautiful．First we should begin with ourselves，such as not spitting in public，not throwing away rubbish everywhere，and so on．Second，we should plant more trees．each citizen should plant at least a tree each year．Last，everyone should abide by rules and regulations against illegal builds．Only in this way，can we build a better place to live in．．

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分析 高分句型：
【高分句型一】Great changes have taken place in Wenzhou since the government took actions against illegal buildings．自从政府采取措施治理违法建筑以来，温州已经发生了巨大的变化．句子的主语是great changes，这时候谓语动词要用take place，由于采取措施是在发生变化之前，所以从句中要用一般过去时，而主句要用现在完成时．
【高分句型二】Every one of us should take part in the action to help keep Wenzhou more tidy and beautiful．我们每一个人都应该积极行动起来，你能帮助温州更整洁，更漂亮．take part in 是固定短语，意思是"参与"指的是参与某个活动，并在活动中起作用，不定式短语作目的状语．

解答 Great changes have taken place in Wenzhou since the government took actions against illegal buildings．【高分句型一】Wherever and whenever you go，you will see the enclosing walls have been removed；，rubbish becomes less； the green field gets big and big； the number of parks is larger and larger； the air turns fresher and fresher； we have more places to have fun．Wenzhou has become green．and is getting more and more beautiful．（介绍温州发生的巨大变化）Every one of us should take part in the action to help keep Wenzhou more tidy and beautiful．【高分句型二】First we should begin with ourselves，such as not spitting in public，not throwing away rubbish everywhere，and so on．Second，we should plant more trees．each citizen should plant at least a tree each year．Last，everyone should abide by rules and regulations against illegal builds．Only in this way，can we build a better place to live in．（为"美丽温州"做些什么）

点评 考生在写作时，首先要仔细审题，要注意使用现在的时态，在表述的时候要选用合适地道的语言，为使行文连贯流畅，可以使用first，second，last来表示先后顺序．可以使用让步状语从句，不定式短语等提高得分点的结构．