Question

【题目】请仔细观察下面的图片，并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。

提示：（1）What are the man and the woman doing?

（2）What should you do when you see people litter like this? Why?

要求：（1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

（2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。

（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

参考词汇：throw, environment, civilized(文明的

I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is_______________

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Answer 1

【答案】I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is throwing his rubbish in the public place.The other woman is stopping him and telling him to put it into the dustbin.The city is our home. We should protect it. Therefore, when we see someone litter like this, we should act like the woman.The environment should be protected by everybody.We should be civilized citizens.

【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如in the picture，in the public place，the other woman，put it into the dustbin，like this。而I can see a man and a woman in the picture./ We should protect it./ We should be civilized citizens.等多种情态动词句式it is important for everyone to protect them.的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。