Question

【题目】书面表达（10分）

Daniel是阳光中学9年级1班的学生, 你想推荐他成为班长。请根据下列内容要点，用英语写一篇介绍Daniel的短文。

1．他很聪明，常能想出很多好点子；

2. 耐心, 做事有条理，从不忘记他必须做的事；

3．他喜欢红色，因为红色可以是他更容易做决定。当他遇到困难时，她就会穿红色；

4．他乐于助人，经常帮助我们解决一些数学难题；

5． 我相信……

注意：1. 短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；

2．第5点用1-2句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥。词数90词左右。

Daniel is a Class 1, Grade 9 student in Sunshine Secondary School.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Daniel is a Class 1, Grade 9 student in Sunshine Secondary School.As everybody knows, Daniel is the best student in our class and I think he is the most suitable candidate for the monitor.

Firstly, he is highly intelligent and hard working. He does extremely well in his lessons and always get A’s in all his subjects. Furthermore, he is never too proud of his achievements.

Secondly, he is warm-hearted and always ready to help others. For example, last May our classmates Zhang Ming broke his legs in a basketball match and he had to stay in bed for a month. It was Daniel that offered to help him with lessons every day. As a result, Zhang Ming was able to catch up with others in studies.

Thirdly, Daniel takes an active part in all kinds of social activities, such as donating money to the children in the poor areas, helping the disabled and the old do whatever they need, and so on..

Generally speaking, Daniel is qualified to be our monitor.

【解析】

试题分析：本次写作任务是根据提示和要求推荐丹尼尔做班长。具体到本次写作，考生要先审清题目要求，确定好作文人称、时态、写作要点、段落等基本内容。明确作文的基本内容后，就是选用准确的词汇和恰当的句子来表达。其中要特别注意最后一点，我们需要用自己的话来讲这一条补充完整，这就需要我们发挥自己的想象力，补充的内容要符合上下文的文意。写作时，要适当使用一些句型、句式，使文章表达流畅。

写作亮点：文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如do well in，For example，As a result，catch up with, takes an active part in，and so on，generally speaking，be qualified to；还运用句型It was Li Hua that offered to help him with lessons every day.这句运用强调句；Li Hua takes an active part in all kinds of social activities, such as donating money to the children in the poor areas, helping the disabled and the old do whatever they need, and so on.这句运用了非谓语动词。并注意了句子的衔接如：Furthermore，Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly等等。