Question

6．根据表格内容提示，以A Happy Day to Quanzhou为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文．介绍一下你上周末春游的情况，可适当发挥．

A Trip to Quanzhou
Time	Activities	Feeling
7：40a．m．	meet at the school gate and go to Quanzhou by bus	excited
9：10a．m．	arrive in Quanzhou	surprised
9：30a．m．	boat on a lake	interesting
12：00a．m．	have lunch in a local restaurant
2：00p．m．	go to the zoo	funny
7：50p．m．	come back home	tired，happy

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
But then I became very brave because it was so interesting但是之后我变得勇敢因为很有趣．
because引导的原因状语从句．
【高分句型二】
The food tasted so delicious that we were all satisfied with it食物尝起来是如此的美味以至于我们都很满意．
so…that从句：如此…以至于…

解答 A Happy Day to Quanzhou
We had a wonderful trip to Quanzhou last Saturday．We met at the school gate at 7：30 a．m．and went to Quanzhou by bus．We felt excited．At 9：10 a．m．，we arrived in Quanzhou and we were all surprised to see the beautiful，old and culture city．From 9：30 a．m．to 12：a．m．，we boated on a lake．At first，I felt a little afraid．But then I became very brave because it was so interesting．【高分句型一】We had lunch in a local restaurant．The food tasted so delicious that we were all satisfied with it．【高分句型二】（上午）
In the afternoon，from 2：00p．m．we spent three hours going to the zoo to see animals．We felt very happy．
We came back home at 7：50p．m．We all felt tired but happy after the trip．（下午）

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．