Question

11．亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束！在此离别之际，恰逢21世纪英语周刊征稿，请你以"A/An …Person in My School Life"为题，介绍一位老师或同学，描述一件发生在你们之间的、令你印象深刻的事情并谈谈你的感受．
                 A/An ____ Person in My School Life
                     ．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
She is the best friend①I've made in the class，②who is always there for me ③when I am in need of help她是我班上交的最好的朋友，总是在我需要帮助的时候支持我．
①省略了who的定语从句，修饰friend，who作为宾语，故省略．
②who引导的非限制定语从句，修饰friend．
③when引导的时间状语从句．
【高分句型二】
"A friend in need is a friend indeed"．患难见真情．
谚语的使用．

解答 A Helpful Person in My School Life
I have met a lot of people in my school life．One of them is my good friend Emma．She is the best friend I've made in the class，who is always there for me when I am in need of help．（给我帮助最大的是艾玛）【高分句型一】
Recently，I found myself getting upset easily．I often complained about the stress and even couldn't concentrate on studies．Emma noticed my problem and spent two hours with me one day，talking about her own stress and how she was dealing with difficulties．From her，I learnt that the only way to beat difficulties is keeping trying instead of complaining．And I felt much more confident to fight against them together with Emma．（所经历的事情）
"A friend in need is a friend indeed"．【高分句型二】A good friend is who makes you happy when you are crying and strong when you are giving in，and that is Emma to me．（感受）

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