Question

【题目】书面表达

“传递爱心，服务他人”是文明社会所倡导的理念。狮子会(the Lions)就是一个以此为宗旨的国际性服务团体。杨敏是狮子会的一名成员，多年来她一直乐于助人。请根据提示用英语写一篇短文，向校刊的English World栏目投稿，简要介绍杨敏的事迹，然后谈谈你的观点和打算。

	Ready to help others
	Yang Min ◆help others for years ◆go to the old people's home twice a month (cut hair. wash clothes, do some cleaning) ◆offer people umbrellas or raincoats on rainy days
	◆your opinion …… ◆your plan ……

要求：

1．短文内容必须包含表格所提供的要点，可适当发挥；

2．文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名；

3．词数：80 - 100（短文开头已给出，仅供选择使用，不计人总词数）。

短文开头：From time to time，we are moved by the people and things around us. Yang Min is one of the persons I admire most.

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Answer 1

【答案】

From time to time, we are moved by the people and things around us. Yang Min is one of the

persons I admire most. As a member of the Lions, she has been helping others for many years. She goes to the old peopled home twice a month to cut hair, wash clothes and do some cleaning for them. Besides, on rainy days she offers people umbrellas or raincoats for free.

Fin deeply moved by her story. Fm going to start with small things around me. I plan to give books and clothes to children in poor villages. Whats more, Til ask my parents and more friends to join me. Small action can make a big difference. Let5s help those who need help!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。向校刊的English World栏目投稿，简要介绍杨敏的事迹，然后谈谈自己的观点和打算。本文所给材料比较详细，并且给出了具体要求，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，字数在80至100之间。

写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，表达清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语言通顺，要点齐全，条理清楚，字数符合要求，没有拼写和语法错误，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。